…t lead of the week, I needed to ask him to take time off and rest but I was not going to force him. Therefore, I decided to check on him more than once every day hoping he would say or do something or show some weakness that would support my argument that he needed the rest, but I got nothing!
Mugaya Joel Patrick
It is a nice peace, but I suggest wrap the conclusion is supporting the title of the story. this kinda leaves the story hanging.